I'm really confused by this one. Any feedback would be especially appreciated with her. It's unfinished but I like where it's going, that's all I know.
The background and the window frame are very interesting with the shifts in detail. And I like the way the profile of the head and neck are just slightly off-center. What were you confused about? If anything isn't working as well as what I mentioned, it is the body shape. Something about that arm and the side of her body isn't clicking...hope that helps!
Right now it seems like you're values are all the same. Brighten up the background a little bit, then add some highlights to the flowers. Not too much other wise the attention would fall onto the flowers more than the figure itself. The second painting you posted on March 26th was very successful because of your stronger variation in values. And I think the strong silhouette of the figure against a light background would really make a nice effect. Just my 2 cents...
i love your collages, they work so well together with all the different elements and i like the color scheme and its a nice piece. you do well with organic shapes and nature. good stuff chica! p.s. happy b-day!
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The background and the window frame are very interesting with the shifts in detail. And I like the way the profile of the head and neck are just slightly off-center. What were you confused about? If anything isn't working as well as what I mentioned, it is the body shape. Something about that arm and the side of her body isn't clicking...hope that helps!
Right now it seems like you're values are all the same. Brighten up the background a little bit, then add some highlights to the flowers. Not too much other wise the attention would fall onto the flowers more than the figure itself. The second painting you posted on March 26th
was very successful because of your stronger variation in values. And I think the strong silhouette of the figure against a light background would really make a nice effect. Just my 2 cents...
I love this piece
i love your collages, they work so well together with all the different elements and i like the color scheme and its a nice piece. you do well with organic shapes and nature. good stuff chica! p.s. happy b-day!
Wonderful as is,maybe a bird on a branch?
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